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Who’s Talking? Can You Tell by the Dialogue?

“Who’s Talking? Can You Tell by the Dialogue?” by Joan Y. Edwards

Look at one of your manuscripts. Is each character’s voice different? Can your readers tell who’s talking? Does each character speak with a different voice. A voice that is distinctive.

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Copyright © 2014 Joan Y. Edwards

Does the dialogue indicate every aspect of his character so that no one would mistake his words as coming from another character? Does a character’s traits show in the dialogue he speaks?

Ali Luke says one good trick is to take just the lines of dialogue in your short story or novel – cut out the action and dialogue tags (he said, she said) – and see whether you can figure out who said what.

You can even hand your BETA READER a copy. According to Wikipedia, a BETA READER is a person who reads a written work before its publication to find and improve elements such as grammar and spelling, as well as suggestions to improve the story, its characters, or its setting. Your critique groups are BETA READERS. However, when I’ve heard BETA READER used, it is a special person chosen by the author to give them feedback on a whole book before the author submits it to an editor or agent.

Ask a reader to read the pages of dialogue and write in who was talking for each. Readers should be able to tell that a different person is talking. If they know the characters and their character traits, they’ll have a better chance of figuring out who is talking.

If you don’t have access to a reader, read it yourself. Check it yourself with a chapter from your latest manuscript. Take out the “he said, she said” dialogue tags. You can even go so far as to take out the action, too.

From doing this you’ll realize the importance of giving each character distinct speech patterns and unique character traits. If all of your characters sound like they came out of the same box, creative revision might be a good idea.

Ali Luke gave some ideas for creating distinctive dialogue for characters and I added a few of my own:

  • How Old Is the Character: a teen and grandpa don’t talk the same way
  • Gender: male and female characters won’t use the same vocabulary
  • Socio/economic class: Is your character from the slums or rich with money and worldly goods?
  • Education level: Does the character use a small or big vocabulary? Can you tell he didn’t finish high school?
  • Where Does He Live: Can you tell where they live by their words? Can you tell their native language?
  • Pet Words/Phrases: Does one of your characters have a pet word, phrase, or expression? OMG, You don’t say!
  • Personality Traits: Do his words indicate that the character is stingy? dumb? smarter than a dictionary? Chatty versus man of few words?
  • What does the Character Want? Money, fame, independence, freedom, or something else?
  • What does the Character Need? Confidence, love, power or something else?


  1. Ali Luke. “10 Easy Ways to Improve Your Dialogue:” http://writetodone.com/10-easy-ways-to-improve-your-dialogue/Think about
  2. Beth Kinderman and Nikki Walker. “The 100 Most Important Things To Know About Your Character (revised):” http://www.miniworld.com/adnd/100ThingsAboutUrPCBackGround.html
  3. Story Jumper.com. “StoryStarter – Telling your story in 7 steps:” http://www.storyjumper.com/main/starter

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9 Responses

  1. great points about dialogue. WIll link to this post for my writing classes. Thanks, Joan!


    • Dear Carol,
      Thanks for writing. I’m glad you think these are good points about dialogue. I am honored that you’re going to link to my post for your writing classes.

      Never Give Up


  2. This is a really useful post. Your links at the end are especially good. Thanks!


    • Dear Rosi,
      Thanks for writing. I’m glad this post is very useful to you. Thanks for letting me know the resources I listed were good.

      Never Give Up


  3. Hi Joan,
    Thanks for all the informative tips and links. I have always struggled with this and your article will help me!


    • Dear Deb,
      Thanks for writing. You’re very welcome for the informative tips and links. When I found this exercise, I said to myself, “Oh, wow! Now that’s going to help me. I can blog about it and maybe I can help others, too.”

      I’m glad you let me know it’s going to help you.
      When I did Nanowrimo in 2008, I wrote and didn’t put a lot of who siad what. When I did my next one, I made sure I put who said what and the quotation marks, too. Because when you’re writing a draft you’re just getting the story out. The words may or may not show the chief characteristics of your characters. At the beginning of each chapter, put the chief characteristics of your main character and others so you’ll know what to focus their dialogue.

      Celebrate you
      Never Give Up


  4. Joan,
    Thanks for the dialogue tips. I went back and reworked some of my story dialogue this morning. I decided it didn’t flow in a natural way. I bet I would have made even more changes if I applied each of these tips. There’s always room for improvement. Thanks again for providing quality information.


    • Dear Linda Andersen,
      Thanks for writing. You’re very welcome for the dialogue tips. I’m glad you were able to use them to rework some of your story dialogue to make it flow in a natural way. Each time I find a new way to make something better it fills me with joy and confidence. I hope it did that for you, too.

      Never Give Up


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