“Pitch Exercise #2 Romance – Would You Accept or Reject These Pitches?” by Joan Y. Edwards
Try this new Pitch Exercise #2 Romance in Monkey Survey form:
When you click on the link, the questions show up and you put in your answers. There are 10 pitches and 10 choices for each one.
Is this a pitch that you don’t like?
Reject it and tell the reasons why. There are 7 possibilities listed. Check the appropriate answers.
Is this a pitch that sells you on the manuscript?
Accept it by asking for 3 chapters and a summary.
If it’s an already published book or movie, choose that option and make note of the title of the book.
Here are the statements that accompany each pitch:
|1. Reject it.|
|2. This pitch is missing main character.|
|3. This pitch doesn’t tell what main character wants or needs.|
|4. This pitch doesn’t tell why main character can’t get what he wants or needs.|
|5. This pitch is missing emotional hook.|
|6. This pitch is missing conflict.|
|7. This pitch is missing change in character.|
|8. This pitch is missing universal theme.|
|9. Accept it. Ask for first 3 chapters and a summary. Why? (Put answer in box below)|
|10. This is a pitch from an already published book or movie. (Put title in box below)|
As of December 24, 2012 we have 6 responders. When 10-15 people respond, I’ll share the results.
When you’ve done the survey, please leave a comment below:
1. How could I improve the exercise?
2. What did you learn from doing this exercise?
3. Did Pitch Exercise #2 Romance help you discover a better way to write your pitch? How?
Please tell me your three favorite children’s books: picture books, chapter books, middle grade novels, and/or young adult novels. In January I’ll do an exercise on pitches for Children’s books.
In January or February, I’ll do a chat or webinar. I’ll announce the dates later.
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Joan Y. Edwards, Pitch Corner USA
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