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Write a Pitch for Your Manuscript – Week Two

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I renamed this post to the above title: #Pub Sub 3rd Fri – Week Two – June 2010

Thanks for joining me in Pub Sub 3rd Fri. Our goal commitment is to submit an article, poem, illustration, song, or book manuscript to a publisher on the third Friday of each month for a whole year. I’m glad I can count you in.

You’ve said to yourself, “I can do it.” You’ve taken action. During Week One, you sent your creative work to your critique group or to a professional editing service for critique. You chose the publisher for this month’s submission. You printed out this publisher’s guidelines and saved them to your computer in your submissions folder.

Now here are the steps for Week Two to take to help you achieve the PubSub3rdFri goal for the month of June.

Week Two
1. Let your manuscript sit a week in an incubator while you do your query or cover letter, resume, and proposal.

2. If the guidelines say to write a query letter and not to send the manuscript, then write your query letter. You can go to Query Shark http://queryshark.blogspot.com/ and check out Charlotte Dillon’s website http://www.charlottedillon.com/query.html/. She has a query sample, names of books, and links to online articles about query letters. Awesome resource! Here’s another telling you how to write a pitch letter for that indepth article you’ve written: http://www.ehow.com/how_2117753_write-pitch-letter.html

3. If you’re submitting a manuscript or article, write a cover letter to accompany it. Good sources for cover letter notes are Moira Allen’s http://www.writing-world.com/basics/cover.shtml and http://resourcesforwriters.suite101.com/article.cfm/how_to_write_a_cover_letter/.

a. Write a pitch for your manuscript, article, or illustration of 25 words or less and include it and include it in your cover letter. A pitch is an eye catching, heart trapping summary of your book or article. It can also be called your “Hook.” Here is a great site to see a few pointers about writing a pitch: http://www.ehow.com/how_5824250_write_novel_pitch.html/. You can submit your pitch to the SCBWI list serve email group and ask them for suggestions on revisions of your pitch. Write it on a 3×5 card. If you can’t get it all written on the front side of the card, it’s too long.

b. Mention one book, article, or illustration similar to yours and how yours would hook readers and attract them to it.

c. If you’re a member of SCBWI, mention that fact in your cover letter. SCBWI has a great reputation with publishers.

4. Write your resume. Here is a link to Moira Allen’s walking your through a good one: http://www.writing-world.com/rights/resume.shtml

a. Include your snail mail address, phone number, email address, website, blog.

b. List all memberships in professional organizations.

c. Include all of your publishing credits.

5. If necessary, write your proposal. Here’s a link to a site that also has videos on you-tube. http://www.bookproposalwriting.com/

When you submit, whether you submit, early, on-time, or late, print a PUB SUB 3RD FRI CERTIFICATE from my website http://www.joanyedwards.com/pubsub3rdfri.htm/ to tape on your computer. If you are late, print a RAIN CHECK I’LL SUB IN 7 DAYS to tape on your computer. You get to take it down when you submit. At the end of the year you hopefully will 12 Certificates to show your accomplishments! Publishers will have 12 examples of your great writing or illustrating. At best you will have done more submitting than you did in the year 2009. That is a great gift to give yourself!

My hope and prayer is that you and I will hear or see “YES, I’d like to purchase your manuscript” from a publisher.

Check my website for the Pub Sub 3rd Fri certificates and rainchecks, http://www.joanyedwards.com/pubsub3rdfri.htm/

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I love reading your questions and comments. Celebrate each little step you take. Say a prayer of thanksgiving to God for helping you get where you are. Each step gives you wings to fly into publication!

Do something good for yourself today! You deserve it.
Joan Y. Edwards

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4 Responses

  1. Encourage! Encourage! Encourage! You’re so good at that!

    Linda A.


    • Dear Linda, Thanks for writing such a sweet comment. I hope it helps spur someone on to putting it in the mail in the third week! You’re a great encourager, too. Thanks for following me and supporting me. Enjoy Life’s Journey Joan Y. Edwards Flip Flap Floodle says, “I Won’t Give up.” http://www.joanyedwards.com/FlipFlapFloodle.htm


  2. You’re great! Thanks for your support. Maybe I’ll actually send some out. I agree with Linda A. you are very good at encouragement.

    Sharon W.


    • Dear Sharon, Thank you for you kind comment. I’m glad to support you. I want you to get your work out there into the hands of a publisher!!!!!!!!!!!! You can do it. It’ll take you only an hour to do the research to find the place to send your work. And an hour to do spell check and grammar check. Then send it off to a critique group. If you don’t have a critique group, send it to me. I’ll critique it for you. (If you critique a story for me in return.) Let’s get your work ready. Get set. Go, Sharon. Enjoy Life’s Journey Joan Y. Edwards http://www.joanyedwards.com/FlipFlapFloodle.htm Be like Flip Flap Floodle and say, “I Won’t Give up.”


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